R.I.P ~ Poem for Goiphan

So sad and so painful,
A life has disappeared...
So sudden and so shocking,
One evening can be...

A life taken without a reason,
A son gone... and it can''t be justified

Frustration, pain and even anger is
What''s left for us to feel...
How could this have happened?
So young yet and so naive

It feels so unfaire...
Almost as if we have been cheated by life... by fate... by the stars in the sky...

Tears fill my eyes as it won''t add up in my mind...
Four lives taken... four bright sons...
Irreplaceable to this world
So much they had to live for...
Gone in a moment... in a crash.

Who to blame and who to comfort...
All seems unclear right now

Undoubtedly though... love can definitely be felt,
Love for all the children whose lives were cut short...
May you all rest in peace...

Wherever you may have gone...
I hope you''re looking down with a smile onto this unjustified world...
May God bless your souls...
R.I.P. Our thoughts will forever be with you.

For You Goiphan!

Nice poem man, major respect. R.I.P Goiphan

nice man! very nice! i'm gonna go drinkin with a few friends of mine tomorrow and i'm gonna dedicate one to goiphan.

Fantastic poem for him. :)

Simply amazing. It is good to know that there are many people out there like you who care so much about our members. But everyone should not remember Goiphan as a PSPISO mod, but as a kind, helpful, and caring person to society. Anyone can be a PSPISO member, but very few people can be like Goiphan.

Rep for the poem, it was great.

i like the message of the poem. however, the actual writing has no flow. poetry requires rhythm and structure. you also have a tendency to overuse the word "so". sorry to be a critic, but i'm just trying to help :)

Beautiful poem

For an amazing person

We will miss you Goiphan!!!

R.I.P

i like the message of the poem. however, the actual writing has no flow. poetry requires rhythm and structure. you also have a tendency to overuse the word "so". sorry to be a critic, but i'm just trying to help :)

This is not the type of thing to critique. It is a poem in memory of a great man who died, not a homework assignment. Pay attention to the message, looking for mistakes in it is very disrespectful.

whos goiphan

yea, who is goiphan and who would go and write a gay poem for them?

Please tell me why he is soo great, other than the fact that he died.

yea, who is goiphan and who would go and write a gay poem for them?

Please tell me why he is soo great, other than the fact that he died.

1st of all if you dont even have anything respectful to say about him then just leave or dont say s**t and Goiphan was a mod that helped the community a lot and also what kind of sick person are you? :mad:
also great poem hope that Goiphan sees this

A amazing poem for a amazing person.RIP Goiphan

Do not worry my friends..any other idiot who thinks they're funny will be banned for 3 weeks! NO QUESTIONS!

Good poem dude..I propose a toast..to Goiphan: a true legend..

Respect for Goiphan, im a new memeber here, but i am sure ,he is one of those people who made this site a nice community so RIP may u find ure peace up there!! nice poem btw meaning so deep.

Excellent job saddiq...

how ever did he had a stroke anyways??

Great poem. Well miss you.

Sweet Poem.. Well miss you Goiphan

NOO!!! Why!!?? WHY!!!??? NOOOOOOO!! Why is the world so cruel!!! why did he have to die!!??? sob sob sob

yea, who is goiphan and who would go and write a gay poem for them?

Please tell me why he is soo great, other than the fact that he died.

Shuttup noob, he was a great guy. U son of a ...... don't come back to pspiso until u learn to respect. Peace to ♥Goiphan. RIP

___ A lesson learnt from the fatal incident ___

Sleep early
Although our community is good

Eat before surfing net
Although our community is good

Eat comes first
Although our community is good

Games are no prior to FOOD and REST
Although our community is good

Stroke is fatal, prevention is thus important and it's first priority
Although our community is good

Gaming is good, Healthy lifestyle is better, Stay healthy is splendid
Although our community is good

As far as i know, gaming can lead to serveral illness
If you dont know
U had just realised how good the community is


p.s.
Im not from the HEALTH MINISTRY
Im just a biology student.
Wonderful POEM, eh??
Anyone..
Anyone can give positive karma
JKJK

R.I.P Goiphan.; I remember Goiphan on the forums from time to time.

Sorry? I hope I'm not banned for asking, I'm a bit of a noob. But, Who is Goiphan?

So sorry if this makes anyone uncomfortable.

Thanks for the poem. It means a lot to us. :)

___ A lesson learnt from the fatal incident ___

Sleep early
Although our community is good

Eat before surfing net
Although our community is good

Eat comes first
Although our community is good

Games are no prior to FOOD and REST
Although our community is good

Stroke is fatal, prevention is thus important and it's first priority
Although our community is good

Gaming is good, Healthy lifestyle is better, Stay healthy is splendid
Although our community is good

As far as i know, gaming can lead to serveral illness
If you dont know
U had just realised how good the community is



p.s.
Im not from the HEALTH MINISTRY
Im just a biology student.
Wonderful POEM, eh??
Anyone..
Anyone can give positive karma
JKJK


Actually, i dont think this is the right place and time to say it, this did made me smile.

+1 rep then i guess. ;)

well said....+rep

R.I.P Goiphan

Never knew u Goiphan, R.I.P, u changed the PSPISO community in a positive way, but don't worry we will all see you in the afterlife, till then may you rest in peace, i know anyone here would give anything to see u for one more minute and remember and say u did good if not great. I'll meet u up there when my time is up down here :(

i like the message of the poem. however, the actual writing has no flow. poetry requires rhythm and structure. you also have a tendency to overuse the word "so". sorry to be a critic, but i'm just trying to help :)
i'm not sure he wrote it.
goiphan didn't die in a crash.

i would say RIP but it's overused and so i think ill just say goodbye goiphan :( you'll be missed.

nice dedication man

I'm so shocked that Goiphan has past on.... how did he die anyway????????????????

R.i.p Goiphan

yea, who is goiphan and who would go and write a gay poem for them?

Please tell me why he is soo great, other than the fact that he died.

this shows what ind of person you are never come back to this forum
R.I.P
Goiphan

niccoism is an idiot, this isnt the kind of thing to critique, even if you think its not expertly written.

great job on the poem, RIP

Man..... I know I'm new here but......... Shocking......

Rest in peace Goiphan....... You will always be remembered.....

R.I.P God bless you

wat happen he past away im sorry about respect go out to him

ergh ****s disgustin

this shows what ind of person you are never come back to this forum
R.I.P
Goiphan

Good on yer, chiipie seems to be a low hearted ------, hope he get banned for life and hes I.P, R.I.P goiphan

Nice poem

who is goiphan??sorry im new please forgive me if i offended anyonne with this question.

i almost cried waa even tho i dont know who goiphan is i think u all really love him